Score: 10

"Cool!"

submission: Alien Rampage

date: December 24, 2009

It was cool to put a storyline between the transitions! The middle part was the best and sounded the most like invading. Also a good choice of instruments to make it sound abstract and alienistic and I am only at half at the song right now and listening to it and reviewing at the same time but why did it just stop right after the second part? That wasn't very good. You should change it and fix it but it had a pretty short third transition that kind of repeated the first.

It reminded me of Beethoven's symphonys like how it had the first part, the second exciting part, and the most enjoyable last part and I think there is a better word for Transitions in this matter but I can't figure out what the word is. I think it was awesome of you to do that even though you probably don't know much of that.

The story was cool too but there should be a part where space marines try to destroy the alien's planet THEN you go on with the invading and crap then they go back to their planet and do something fun but I guess it IS your story but I thought the instruments were well picked out and used and it had a very great "Alien Effect" through the whole thing.

Well overall you picked out the instruments well and they were pretty cool to listen to and it was very alienistic and I think you did a great job on it.

Score: 7

"Sounded like Techno"

submission: Le seul

date: December 5, 2009

I liked it but I am afraid that it sounded more like Techno style music than House style but really, it sounded like both and I liked how it made you feel like you are in some kind of mall or some advanced city or something. But it makes me feel like I am wasting my saturday but whatever, I think it is pretty decent.

Why is it called "Le seul" though? It doesn't have much to do with the name but I liked the drums that came in the middle to stop the repetive sound and sure enough, the song is stuck in my head like it can't get out like the 6 flags theme song they have in the park and the commercials.

The tempo made it seem like it lasted forever in this because while I was first listening to this at the end of the first minute, I was thinking: Man! when is this going to end! Not to critisize it for being too long but actually, that is a reallygood thing because long songs are usually good.

After the middle I liked the beat and the rythm a lot! But too bad that didn't last long but at the end, I thought you were going to finish it but then I realized I had loop on so when I was going to turn it off, I noticed that it had a good loop!

So overall I liked the rythm but the song got pretty repetitive in the middle.

So here is the overall score:

Rythm 9/10
Beat 8/10
Drums 10/10
Tempo 10/10
So good job on this one and sorry this isn't as long as my super-long reviews but oh well, you have this one!

Score: 7

"good"

submission: In the Trees

date: November 6, 2009

I'm sorry about the other review, I hope this one is better...

Anyways. The tempo is good because this is really short but it makes it sound very long. I also like the pitch of your voice.

I fully understand that there were no instrments in this. Also did you get a good score on it? I hope so.

I also understand that it probably took you a lot of time to get it right. I like this one more because, well I don't know It just sounds somewhat better. I looked at the other reviews and saw that you had no vocal trainer. That's good!

After you are done with your assignment and turn it in, you should make another version with instrument. You should work on making your voice a little bit clearer.

Score: 7

"Wow, a lot of explict audio."

submission: 4:20am

date: November 2, 2009

You went kind of overboard with all of the explict lyrics I mean there wasn't a sentence that didn't have the word "shit" in it. You know making explict audio doesn't make you any cooler (I'm trying not to sound like a goody goody right now)

Anyways, the beat was not very original like the other songs like this that have the same beat but different lyrics. (How come people used to do that all the time!?) Anyways, why is called 4:20, I don't think it has anything to do with it.

Did you use helium after the middle because it sounds kind of weird here. I couldn't understand the lyrics there either. but I noticed that there was an added instrument near the end.

I can't find anything else to say so here is the overall score:

Lyrics 6/10
Beat 6/10
Originality 3/10
Choice of instruments 10/10
Drum 10/10
I don't know what the name of the instrument at the end is but I give it a 10/1-

Try to make one that's more original next time.

Score: 10

"I actually LIKED the guitar in it."

submission: Shine Cover (NO VOX)

date: November 1, 2009

I'm glad that you put the guitar in it because it would be bland with only drums. I also liked what the beat is at the end but this song is WAY too long and it was the same beat so it got pretty repetive like in thge middle. 2 minutes would be more reasonable. but on the last minute of the song I heard this beeping noise, was this the guitar because I think it was. But I agree with Alix1, It DOES need some lyrics and singing to it and can imagine what it would sound like with it and it would sound very cool if you did. I also don't know why this is called "Shine Cover". The namejust doesn't go along with it. So this is your SECOND attempt, i can't imagine what the first one sounds like so I looked at it but I was suprised that the first one is better than this. Other than that, here is the overall score:

Choice of Instruments 10/10
Beat 10/10
Guitar 10/10
Drum 10/10
Originality 10/10

Hope you enjoyed this review!
5/5
10/10

{Review Request Club}

Score: 10

"Would make a great theme song on a game."

submission: -Zestify-

date: November 1, 2009

You did very good at the beginning with the drums and the bass guitar and all of the other instruments and I liked the beat a lot. I think this is pretty neat. It wasn't very glitchy like you said, you probably have a slow computer or something because I'm on my laptop right now and it sounds fine to me. Also to me, the static sounded pretty cool for this song but im sure it would make it sound crappier on other songs. But I skipped to like the middle and It sounded the same which made it sound sort of repetitive. The ending is very cool too how it just faded out. But I had first opinions on the beginning because I though it wouldn't be very clear but it sounded like it was on a radio of some sort at the beginning but I still liked this song and I think you should keep it up. Here is the overall score

Originality 6/10 (Because it was inspired by another song)
Effort 10/10
Beat 10/10
Choice of Instruments 10/10
Drums 10/10
Bass Guitar 10/10
Like I said, keep it up!

Score: 10

"I though it was pretty cool."

submission: [DX] Haunted Hip-Hop

date: November 1, 2009

I liked the beat and you did a very good job with the drums too. I can't really picture it in a Halloween Genre though. I agree that it was kind of short though. But i still liked it a lot.I kind of feel like I have heard it in a boss battle in a game. It would fit very well if someone was looking for a boss battle song. I mean like a HARD boss battle. Kind of the same when it got halfway so you should like break off half and make it loop and I bet it would sound the same. I really liked the beat a lot but you should add more instruments to it or something to make it sound cooler because It gets kind of bland with like 3 or 4 instruments in it. Other than that, here is the overall score:

Beat 10/10
Choice of Instruments 10/10
Originality 10/10
Effort 10/10
Do I want an encore? Yes.

{Review Request Club}

Score: 10

"Awesome Job!"

submission: Aleos

date: October 31, 2009

First I thought it was a halloween song at the beginning but when it got farther in, I noticed that Halloween Genre wasn't a good choice. I liked how clear it was when I heard it.

Why don't you make it a flash game if you inspiring for a game unless you don't have flash. It made a good haunted house tune. I liked how you used the instruments in it.

I still can't believe that no one has reviewed on this yet. This is a good song. I really enjoyed it. I think it would be cool if someone downloaded this and somehow got it to a big stereo set and play it outside a house tonight because it's one of the things you usually hear when you are about to enter a house transformed into a haunted house.

Other than that I have nothing else to say.
5/5
10/10

Score: 10

"Best song I have heard all day!"

submission: Windows Wars

date: October 31, 2009

I had heard all of the sounds that Windows and Macs made and I thought it would be the crappiest song ever because I would hear all the annoying sounds I hear on My computer everyday but Instead, it came out very good!

It was also very clear and almost sounded like a symphony. Bu you should make a flash of this as a music video. I'm sure It would get a good score if you did. You also did a good job with the drums and sometimes I didn't recognize the sounds because it sounded good.

It i amazing that this song took 44 sound effects. I'm sure it took a lot of effort for you to make this song. I found this song when I was looking at your post on the BBS and then I clicked one of the links at the bottom of your post.

Dont stop going to Newgrounds. You should make more songs like this. I really enjoyed it enough to download it on my MP3. Also how all of the annoying sounds we hear every day got collected and put into a great song.

10/10
5/5
Kudos to you

Score: 10

"i like it"

submission: Waltz of Reminiscing

date: October 27, 2009

It feels like I have heard it from a game like Figure 8 or something but it's not. I really liked the beat and it was very simple and relaxing. It sounds like something I'd sleep to. It made me not want to press pause or something to stop it. That's why I favorited it. This is probobly one of my favorite songs now it ssounds like sometyhing I would hear if I was looking at a photo album. You did a very nice job on this one