Score: 10

"Weird, but a Pretty Unfair Score!"

submission: The Mummy's Tomb

date: 4 hours ago

This was a weird but I am happy to say that this is my 300th review! So I am going to force myself to reach the character limit. Well anyways, I liked how the screen looked like it was ACTUALLY an old T.V. I thought that was pretty creative but what DID give you the idea to make this? I am glad that you used ACTUAL art instead of sticks so you get a point for that but I liked how the venom on the snake was animated but I was pretty weirded out at the end. I also smirked and I thought was gonna be a game when I pressed Play and it said "Play Game" after but I found that out quickly in the Description. I thought the sound at the end was pretty annoying but oh well.

So I will start on the art. It was very good and I don't think I found a flaw in the art and the animation was pretty smooth too so you get another point for that. I liked how he stabbed the rat thing in the balls because in movies they don't usually do that. I also thought that the this had an unfair score, I think it deserved at least a 4 or something because I a sure you took a while making it but why so short? Also, I would like to voice act for your next one but I don't know if you already have a guy to help with that. I will PM you later. I thin you should get better sound because the laser sound was pretty bad. Try adobe soundbooth for 30 days and see where that gets you.

I thought it was funny when the Sphinx thing knocked the mummy down. (Correct me if I got the name wrong) but why didn;t the mummy like kill the stupid guy. I was waiting for that to happen but Oh well I guess. But why did the bats just keep following the mummy around and I don't know how a bat can eat a snake but oh well for that too I guess. You should also work on making it a little bit longer even though it took you a while to make this, you should set some goals for your next one and plan it out and stuff. What is going to go here and what is going to there and gather up some helpful tools or voice acting to make it more beefier.

I thought the whole thing was odd and random but I have to say that it was original and you probably put in a lot of effort into it too. When i saw the GIF image I thought it was gonna be mostly about rats but it WAS weird how you put a rat's head on a body, that was wrong. You may as well put a human's head on a rat body! (lol just joking) Try to do your best and practice at animation more even though it was good animation. Practice makes perfect even though you may get crazy doing it. The whole thing didn't get much attention out of me because it was actually pretty boring really. You should check it before you publish it and think: "Are my viewers going to enjoy this?"

Comparing this to other movies on NG, this is pretty good and happy that this is the best score that you have gotten on any off your flash and I think you should keep trying until you actually get a good score or even better! A Daily award! Usually this is the type of movies that get there but I am clueless on how this got a bad score. It might have been a Zero-Bomber or something but that kinda sucks to see this flash go to waste. I have got about 950 characters to go so here is the next thing I will be talking about: Audio

The music you picked was pretty good and I don't think this needed voice acting so good call for that. The sound at the end was PRETTY annoying and I think the End screen was too long and annoying. I I was just watching the whole thing to see if there was something at the end or something.

Well now I will give you the overall score:

Art 10/10
Originality 10/10
Concept 10/10
Audio 8/10
Effort 10/10
Animation 10/10
Added Effects 10/10

I wouldn't really recommend that much because it was pretty boring but I think you should work on length, the sounds, and you could try improving your art a little bit even though it is fine but other than that, you got a pretty good submission and I will help out with the score a bit to help you so good day to you and I hope that you enjoyed my Character Limit review. Good night.

{Review Request Club) (Took me a while to write)

Score: 10

"Thought it Was Serious!"

submission: Mastermind

date: December 22, 2009

Whoa! At first I thought this was gonna be serious, action movie but that was uncalled for! The art was very good and the animation was clear and it barely lagged even on my crap computer on High Quality Setting! It reminded me of the Tankmen series where all they care about is dicks and tits. I laughed out loud really! (Lol) It was creative too to make something this stupid be funny. (Not meaning the animation itself was stupid) This is a different style of art than your Blockhead series. I thought the Guy who argued with the Mastermind was gonna get tortured or something but oh well.

The art was fantastic and you did the shading really well on the Mastermind but it was so dark in the room that I couldn't see the soldier's arms so I just saw some guy with a triangle body. But that's OK! I liked how they just kept swearing back at each other but where DID the tits on legs come from! I thought that was funny but dirty but this should have been rated A or something.

The voice acting was good too but where did you get the voice from the Mastermind? Did you tweak it at all because NOBODY I know can make that sound! Well, even though it was short, it was REALLY funny and since I am only watching the first one right now, and about to watch the second for the first time, I think it is going to be about the henchman that left and where he is going to go or something but since, I am so excited to watch it, I gotta finish this review first!

Well anyways, I can's find anything else to talk about so here is the overall score:

Art 10/10
Animation 10/10
Comedy 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Entertainment 10/10
Concept 10/10
Effort 10/10

I think you should make it a little bit longer and make the room a little less dark and that's it! Overall I thought the animation and art was good and the voice acting was great! So I hope you enjoyed the review!

Score: 6

"Not Bad"

submission: A FBF Animation.

date: December 22, 2009

I can't say the idea was original but the song was OK and the overall thing was OK too but I think you need to put in more creativity into it because I can't really blame people for giving it a too because it was pretty short and needed more than a sun, a cloud, a landscape, and a flower. It just didn't really catch my attention really.

The art needed a lot of improvement because it was just basic colors with no anything and I think you need to out in shading, or start out with a sketch on paper because I saw your artwork and it isn't very original so you should start with paper and try shading, it isn't very hard so just look at tips from the art portal or take some art classes and look at my art. I didn't need classes at all.

I can't really say you put much effort and in the description, how long did it REALLY take because I can probably do that in flash in less than an hour because I found it really easy animating when I got the trial of flash but i think you should get some tips from the Flash forum and the forum has all kinds of resources you can use because the Flash Forums help you with easy tips and I think you got by the basics by now.

Overall it needs improvement in originality and art. Also, you should pick something more different to draw. Just be creative and Practice! It DOES make perfect.

Score: 10

"Loved It!"

submission: A Newgrounds Christmas

date: December 21, 2009

Couldn't resist reviewing this but this was pretty awesome! I liked the art I think you drew all of them pretty good but I think Pico and all of the originals didn't look like the way Tom draws them but what the heck, it was Awesome! It was a nice feature to put Bitey and Blockhead in but I didn't notice that Bitey and Blockhead was playing tennis with the Turtle until I watched it two times!

What was that thing on Tom's eye though? It was pretty funny when the guy from your Larry series (That bad guy, I forgot what his name was!) was having this fight with Mastermind I thought that was funny and Larry with that other Ice Thing (I don't look at every series on Newgrounds!) It was also nice that you put in the photo from here on the art Forum but when my Mom sees the Penicorn on my Desktop background, she will kill me! Oh well, I used that picture as the desktop background on my PC.

I have a question, how do you make a lot of cool crap in less than a month! I mean, the Kill Car didn't come out that long ago plus with your Larry series and yes, I am the same person who reviewed your Larry video and responded it and I hope you are reading this right now because sooner or later, this place will be spammed up with crappy reviews but I will find a way to show you!

I thought it was amazing that you only had two Voice Actors, I mean, how can they do that many voices! Well, I am sure The Swain only did the Mastermind and Blockhead voices but other than that, the voice actors were great! I am pretty sure you worked hard into making this so I am actually spending my time and effort into this REVIEW since I don't have flash.(yet)

I think it's sad that I am probably younger than all of the reviewers below and I am actually doing better than the older people! Just remind people to actually look at the Reviewing rules on your next submission because it is pretty sad having bad reviews on a good submission. Well anyways, I think this Flash was good in every way because it reminded me to look at the series that you included in it even though it was short.

Well overall, I thought it was pretty creative to put a bunch of NG characters into one flash because no one really does that. I thought the voice acting was terrific! But also, you need to work on drawing salad fingers a little bit more. I mean coloring it right because it kind of looked wrong. So the art was pretty awesome! The sounds were good too and I will give credit to ZStriefel for that. The animation was good too and a nice way to end the year. Keep making Flash Jazza! You have some true talent! i will look forward to the next Larry Episode that you are probably working on.

I hope you enjoyed the review!

-Joshsouza

Score: 10

"Terrific!"

submission: The Sketch Collab 2009

date: December 16, 2009

The sketches were amazing and they were entertaining and fun to watch! I thought when I draw that face in the preloader when it played the intro, I thought it was the whole thing and I was about to give it a two until I pressed the play button then I saw true talent in lots of users and I was glad that they were original and random and their atristic skills for each one.

I was going to point out a few of my favorite ones and I thought about it and I will say that every one them was unique in a special so they were ll my favorites but I think some of the creators should work on their art but I was sad that there were no sounds but good music that you picked! I thought this was going to be like Luis' only a page of each art with no animation but REALLY REALLY good artwork.

I liked this a lot because first, I love art and animation, actually having a collab on Newgrounds(Because there aren't much submittted often anymore) So overall, I think you need voice acting in the next Collaboration you organize So keep it up!

{Review Request Club}

Score: 7

"Simple"

submission: ChatterBox Chat Room v2.0

date: December 14, 2009

Seeing that you probably put a lot of effort into this, I gave you seven stars because there is already a couple of chatrooms on Newgrounds and the other IMing websites but Chatrooms aren't really that now popular since we have forums and other ways of communicating even though this got a pretty good score and I am glad that people are still using it not including the Chatbots Alice and Generic NG User but the bots made it pretty cool and if I didn't see the description, I would have thought they were real people!

The concept isn't that original like I explained in the first paragraph including the originality but do you get paid for the ads or something? Because I saw a NG ad and some others on this but you should have more options instead of just creating a user profile you should make it like a draw and chatroom or something more original. I don't know.

I think this has some room for improvement and it was just too simple for a good chatroom. You could at least put some emoticons or something because it is pretty boring even though the ideas I said might have spamming but It is weird that nobody spams here even though there isn't a "Ban" feature.

So overall, well just look at paragraph 3 sentence 1 to see my overall from this review. You have my word for it! ;)

Score: 9

"Epic"

submission: -Monsters-

date: December 13, 2009

I thought the art could use a little bit of work but I am sure you put in a LOT of time and effort into making this and if I could choose, I would give a daily award or something but It is just hard to believe that(SPOILER!!!) it took a bomb to destroy the stupid thing! Didn't they call the SWAT! They should've PWND him!

There was lots of blood in this which is good for a halloween submission but I have to say, I wasn't creeped out but it was cool how the monster just went on a rampage and the action started in the first 30 seconds!

Yes, you are right when you said to turn the graphics on Medium because it lagged a lot in a bunch of scenes, like you said but I think this flash should have got some more attention because I thought this flash was pretty cool but at least you got it in before the contest ended but you didn't win anyways so I guess it doesn't matter.

The art was good at some times and bad at some times and all of the cops had 6 fingers (Lol) which was kind of weird and the hands of that person calling 9-1-1 wasn't drawn well either nor the phone but I have to say, it was pretty enjoyable to watch and you are lucky that it got in the Halloween category which is good because I was about to reccommend it to that.

I think overall this was pretty good and long just like a good flash and I think you should work on the art a little more and this kind of reminded me of the Brackenwood series because the monster was fast and mean but it is only a little different because Bitey doesn't kill people, just bugs so I hoped you enjoyed this review!

{Review Request Club}

Score: 7

"Interesting Cconcept"

submission: 60 Seconds of Awesome

date: December 8, 2009

Yes I have seen clips in 30 seconds and 50 seconds but this one was pretty entertaining and I watched it again! It was filled with weird puns that made it entertaining but I didn't like the songs you picked to go with it. Why didn't you use any voice acting at all because It is weird listening to music while watching to a movie with no Voice Acting but at least you had sound at all or else this would have been crap.

Did I see this on the front page because I thought I did! Oh well, this was pretty good and I liked the jokes you used. They made me laugh but I don't think you put much effort into this considering that it is only 60 seconds but who knows? It had pretty decent artwork too so you get 7 for that but I enjoyed the concept the most that made it interesting because it is like telling a story that is only 10 seconds long and that is pretty creative and that is a skill that most people probably don't have except that woman who talks the fastest for a world record.

Sorry that this review isn't that long because I don'y want to spend 20 minutes writing reviews all day and since this was a short flash but overall, I think you should get a mic or something for voice acting and other things or even ask OTHER people for voice acting but yet again, they could only make audio that is 10 seconds long but anyways, here is the overall score

Art 8/10
Concept 9/10
Audio 6/10
Originality 10/10

You should make a sequel with 120 seconds of awesome so you can have 12 clips in it but I guess this was pretty good and decent so you have my word!

{Review Request Club}

Score: 10

"Catchy!"

submission: Grandma's Cheese

date: December 5, 2009

I really liked the song a lot and I watched it like a ton of times now because I like the song and it is fun to watch but did you make it or is it on Itunes like your other song: Get on my Horse which I liked too so I will start here:

The art was really cool and very clear but I had to right-click to see the quality so it wouldn't be so laggy but you are putting a lot of flash movies on Newgrounds in less than a month! Like On the Moon Ep. 17 and 18! Unless you were already don and posted the daily two you are allowed to post and this. I liked the design of the art too. I like that style of artwork that he used.

Like I said before, I loved the music and I think you should keep it up because they are really funny and catchy and they always have the same pitch in every one and before, you made flash with Parry Gripp's Music! Did he inspire you at all? Because that makes sense because it is as much random as your new songs.

I thought it was too bad that it couldn't be a loop but if you did I would probably be staring at my monitor for at least an hour and at the end when it said "More Cheese? I thought it was going to take me to your profile on here but no. I have been ignoring it even though I could have skipped the pre-loader again. Oh well! I liked the ryhme at that too and i put my mouse over it like 20 times because it sounded funny.

Yes, your flashes are original like always which is good. I saw two videos copying Sh0t-D0wn's "I got no Iphone" flash because nobody wants those and the people who do that are noobs. I also notice that you put a lot of creativity into these to make it completely random to make it more original because when you want to make an original flash, just make it completely random like that show, "Chowder" and your "Badger" flash.

I put a lot of effort into your flashes because they are always enjoyable to watch like "A Walk in the Woods" I laughhed my ass off see that bunny thing crapping uncontrollably. Did he use laxatives! That is very uncommon to most animals. Sorry to go off topic there. I just have a lot to tell you in this review even though you probably aren't reading this right now. I still like writing these!

I think you should work on making it less repetetive. I got king of bored watching it this time. But I think you should mmake a Christmas Flash sometime this month because I don't think you have ever done one on Newgrounds unless you are working on one right now but when is the next 8-Bit PWNY club coming out? I really enjoy those the most and they actually NEVER get old. I am sorry if I am asking too much questions I just like your creative flashes so much and I know you are probably busy with other things in your life.

I seem to tend on making long reviews to things I like because it is so easy to review on stuff I like and I feel like I have really accomplished something when I do make super-long reviews like this.

If I would, I would reccommend this to everyone I know that goes on this website or digg right now or something. You deserve something like that for a good flash and since I have already voted a 5 for you and favorited it, I am digging it to help since you always get crummy reviews and to everyone who is just about to say " nice flash, good job", do you really think that will help him at all! This is REVIEWING! Not COMMENTING! I am just pointing that all out to all of you and I myself used to make reviews like the ones below me until I saw that the button read "Review"

I really liked this like I said about 100 times about now so overall you have a ground-breaker here and you deserve more for your effort and here is the overall score in my longest review EVER!

Art 10/10
Audio 100/10 (No that is not a typo!)
Creativity 10/10
Effort 10/10
Originality 10/10
Concept 10/10

So before you press that button, look at my reviews and make more like mine but they don't have to be long as THIS of course! This freakin review took me 20 minutes to write but put in constructive criticsm on t!

5/5
10/10
Reached the character limit so good by

Score: 10

"Interesting"

submission: Microcosm

date: December 4, 2009

At first I thought it was going to be a typical story about a man late for work but good thing that wall was there! That made the storyline, the creativity, and originality very good! So I will start with the art:

I liked the regular black and white like regular comics and it was a cool twist once he hit that random wall and he could control what will happen and when it will happen and I liked the non-stick artwork because that would have made it suck very badly.

The storyline was well thought-out and very good how he reached other panels of the comic for more of an advantage and hoow you got a way to get enemies in it to make it have more action and make it more exciting but where did he get the pencil at the end? But the end reminded me of the Pencilmation series and I can't say what happened to ruin the fun for all of you guys :)

There was much detail into it too but also quite basic but it was very original how first, it was a comic flash which I had never seen before except for Pencilmation but I don't think that counts though. Plus how he fell all through the timeline (comic strips) and landed into trouble literally. But by now you must be as happy as hell that it is Number One Top Scoring... For now.

This is a good flash I had seen in a while but when I saw the gif image, I thought it would be a completely random and experimental flash but why was there an earth as a pre-loader if it has nothing to do with the story at all! It would also be cool if this was some kind of game because it would kind of fit in with using the pencil and grabbing crap from future/past panel like a platformer but I'm just saying this would be cool. Not that you need to make it.

But what if he went back in time and stopped him from bumping his head for some reason? Sure it would ruin his adventure but it would stop him from getting in trouble. At first when that guy said "You have found out the fourth wall" or something but at that moment I was thinking: Wtf? The fourth wall?
But that made it kind of more mysterious in thee story.

I am sure you put a LOT of effort into making this because it was one of the "Movie of the week" style flash since it was so long and fun to watch a billion of times which is a good skill for making flash. But I really enjoyed it soo much that I can't think of a way to improve it at all that it was so good!

But anyways overall it was really fun to watch with much creativity and originality. Plus the fact that you probably took forever making this beautiful movie. Other than that here is the overall score:

Effort 10/10
Audio 10/10
Originality 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Concept 10/10
Art 10/10
I hope you make more as creative as this good flash because this is SERIOUSLY on the top 50 all time scoring! Just keep it up and I hope you enjoyed this super-long review!

10/10
5/5