Joshsouza's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Shape N' Shape Collab]

Funny!

I loved how it was like the original: Bad animation, Horrible Artwork, and that was pretty much the joke on the first one!

So I liked al the jokes they used considering the fact that they probably picked this collab because they are horrible at animating. LOL. My favorite ones where the one when that one circle stole the candy and the round square one. Those were funny and I can't believe how long this was and that it actually took more than 2 mb of space! That's just weird.

I wonder why nobody picked a collab for this yet? but since this is the only one, I guess this is pretty original considering the fact that there was only three of these now I think that are good including the original, some other one and this one and I am pretty sure there are a bunch of other crappy ones ou there but I don't feel like searching it up here.

Some of the voice acting was part of an 11 year-old sounding kid at some point but who cares. I was pretty dissapointed that there was no voice acting on one of them because it didn't fit in very well. he should have gotton a microphone or someone tio voice act for him. My other favorites where the mac and windows one, the one that only had the text that said "shape" and the orange one.

And yes I spent more time writing this review than watching this but overall I liked it. here is the overall score:

Art 10/10 (Because of joke)
Originality 10/10
Animation 10/10 (Because of Joke)
Comedy 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Effort 10/10 (Because of joke)

I hope you enjoyed this review!

ChandlerThompson responds:

Wow, it's truly amazing to see your skill in writing reviews, Joshsouza. It's a total improvement from when you asked me to review your Dot Game, I guess the Review Request Club has taught you well.

Anyway, I'm really happy you enjoyed this. This was my first collab I've led, and we've gotten a pretty negative response towards it so far, but your entertainment from it really makes me happy. Gustavos made the one with the candy that you enjoyed so much, you should check out his other work, he is a very kind person and an excellent flash artist.

I feel no one picked the collab for it because I rushed to the Flash Forum to make sure the idea hadn't already been taken. We started the collab right after the shape fad started, but we unfortunately submitted the flash right when the shape's popularity was ending. I thought most people tried to focus on keeping the theme of their flashes similar to the originals, like JohnnyUtah and Stamper, but despite many people's opinions I am still proud of the final product and all I have learned from this collab.

The voice acting was very childish, mainly because this collab was branching out to many users that had never taken part in a collab before, due to the collab being such an easy and simple topic to animate about. The Mac and PC one was by 14hourlunchbreak, the Shape word one was by GordonFreeman-16, and the orange one was made by adam2510.

Thanks again for the review, I hope my response has answered some of your questions too. Keep reviewing flashes my man, you've got some of the best etiquette for reviewing I've seen in a long time!

[LARRY episode 1]

Funny as HELL

I don't know where to start but I know that the ending credits were from Sonny 2. Yay! I Noticed! So I will start in the next paragraph.

First of all the plotline was PERFECT! Also the way you made it funny too like when the door got slammed on Larry's face and when Larry beat up that guy. I laughed like HELL. I couldn't stop laughing. If I could choose this for the best movie of the year next to Tarboy, and Waiting for the Bus, I would choose this one!

The artwork was really good too like in the backrounds and stuff. I also like how the king was so stupid and Larry had to wear a dress to it. I don't care if these take 2-3 months long because this series has come to a very good start and I hope it stays that way.

The animation was really smooth and I like how everyone mistaked him as a boy and I bet the king's advisor is gonna be pissed when he gets good. But I think you put too much blood in the door pat because I don't think that would happen i real life but it was still very funny.

Although I would only view this on youtube for the full screen viewing but I don't know, if it is on HD i might view it there for now on. I liked how at first I thought this was SERIOUS but then he said "I'm Screwed" and I knew this was going to be funny. I also love how Larry's family is so stupid like his mom is so unaware and his father is fat and his brother is Emo and well.. his sister isn't half bad.

I like how he kept the bandage on so it makes him look like a gil with a red nose but how did he get his tunic back at the end? Maybe his mom washed it already.

I couldn't find out how to make this review bigger so here is the overall score:

Plot 10/10
Story 10/10
Lolitude 10/10
Artwork 10/10
Animation 10/10
I hope this series gets even better so you have my word!
5/5
10/10
Faved

Jazza responds:

actually the ending credits were composed specifically for this movie :P

whoa big compliment thanks man. i LOVE tarboy so i'd never even try and take anyones vote away from that.

yeah with all that blood on the door smack, it was my intention from day one to have a little too much violence then realistically possible in these episodes, so you'll probably see more of that in the future.

he got his tunic back in the end coz he went home to change and he and kikket are walking to kikkets place for their first day of training. :)

thanks heaps for the detailed review i really like that. ur the man :)

[The Sculpture]

Creepy

I liked art a lot, this should have gotten first place in daily scores. The animation wasn't all that smooth. I also like the idea of this. But why didn't that guy just blink! Or that scared guy just look at him. I got a litle freaked out when the face showed up but you were good on the detailing on that. You should make a second one or something because this one was really good and I want to know the rest of the story or like how did it originate. But why did they have a test with INNOCENT people. they should have put people that were in jail to test it out in like that movie, Death Race or whatever it is called. You put a lot of imagination into this. I really liked this. Be nice if you added a screamer of his face at the nd to REALLY scare us. The art kind of looked all pixelized and crappy. Why is that?

Anyways, here is the overall score:

Art 10/10
Voice Acting 10/10
Fear Factor 7/10
Efdort 10/10
Originality 10/10
Concept 10/10
Like I said, make a tribute or something

PBass responds:

Thanks for the compliment, but I don't think I could have competed with HotDiggedyDemon, he blew me out of the water! The guy who was scared didn't turn around because he was, well, freaking out and panicking. The other guy didn't just wink one eye at a time because that's hard to do for any long period of time.
As much as I'd like to take credit the idea is not mine and comes from http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com, there's a whole wealth of other articles and TONS more information! The innocent people were actually death row inmates, and the foundation kills them at the end of each month regardless.
I was thinking of including one last screamer, but I felt like that distracted from the eeriness of the ending. The art was pixelated because I have a hard time compiling sound in flash, so I finished it in Adobe Premiere Pro and then imported the .flv file back into Flash to add the preloader and export it as a swf.

Thanks for the review! I'll be making some more of these later!

[Yings Unfinished Business]

Nice Job!

You did a VERY good job with art and the animation. The two logos were ALSO really good! The audio also went along well. You HAVE to finish these! I'm glad you put a lot of previews annd at the end it tells you what happens next.

I liked the first logo but if you finished the second one with sounds and stuff, I would really enjoy it. But on that one where the the girl is singing, the lip syncing wasn't very good. I read the facts on it and it seems like it would be a very good animation

That really sucks that on the second one, your friend just had to do that and the channel was taken off. To me that one was my favorite. Did you make the Lizard and Fish song, that would be really funny if you did. So here's the overall score:

Art 10/10
Concept 10/10
Originality 10/10
Effort 10/10
Animation 10/10
Sounds and Audio 10/10

If you finished all of these you would have a way better account.

{Review Request Club}

Ying-yong responds:

The second logo originally had sound but interfered it interfered with another movie (for some unexplained reason, the sounds were named two completely different things) so I had to take it off.

Lizard and Fish (song) was made by Logan Whitehurst.

I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'll start working on these again right away!

[Dodraugen]

It came out of it's *****!

The ending didn't really startle me that much because we all saw it coming. The photoshopping didn't really go with the movie because next to it was badly drawn pipes.

The art was pretty good if it only took you 5 hours but that just tells me that you didn't put much effort into it. But why did the snake thing come out off it's *****.it just didn't look right.

The thing that really scared me though was that guy's face. I mean seriously! THAT was the creepiest part. Oh yeah, what's with all of the retards reviewing you. THIS IS NOT COMMENTING. I try to say that to every submission that doesn't have at LEAST ONE GOOD REVIEW ON THE PAGE.

But you should at least put a picture on the loading screen because I got bored reading the text. What's with the music too? If you want to scare someone at least put SCARY music.

So like I said it didn't really startle me. It just made me open my eyes. Well here's the overall score:

Art 10/10
Origiality 10/10
Effort 6/10
Fear Factor 4/10
Concet 6/10
This is an OK flash I guess

Assios responds:

Thanks for a good review. The reason why I made it in like 5 hours, was that I wanted to submit it on Halloween. And yeah, I'll add a background picture to the preloader.

And for the music, I wanted to put "glad" or "normal" music when the guy is sitting there, and "scary" music (I used the Jaws theme) when the snake is crawling up the pipes.

Thanks :)

[The Creep]

No voice acting huh?

This was kind of short but I liked the catch phrase. I though it was weird when the hand just peeled off that guy's skin too easy. I also found it hard to figure out what was going on.

The music was OK too but I can't call this a comedy because the catch phrase wasn't THAT funny. The art was Ok too and animation was smooth. There should be a back side of the story of how the hand got out.

This movie wasn't much original and got boring at some times. (considering that it is short) I also thought it was weird that the head of that guy that was now a skeleton was floating above the rest of it's body.

What is with the other guy too? he could have outran the skeleton man. I;m pretty sure you put a lot of effort into this if there was four people making it.

here is the overall score:
Art 8/10
Originality 3/10
Music 5/10
Concept 6/10
Effort 10/10
Try to make a better one next time.

[Bloody Sundae]

This was pretty funny.

The art was pretty awesome and it has been a lot of time since someone has posted a Twilight Fan themed animation. I liked how she didn't care that he was eating somebody's guts.

There were to funny things at the end that made it the best like the dairy queen almost right next to the cabin and for the other one, I won't spoil it to you guys. Also, who are those sick kids who keep saying for the werewolf to rape the vampire? Seriously, that's wrong.

The concept and originality was very good and I am pretty sure you have put a lot of effort into this flash. The comedy was original too for what happened at the end. Also when she was going through the woods to find a Dairy Queen. Fat stores are not in the woods! Please make another that's good like this.

Originality 10/10
Comedy 10/10
Effort 10/10
Art 10/10
Concept 10/10
Nice one!
Review Request Club

Pixmintro responds:

Oh god thank you so much, you don't know how much it means to me to finally get a helpful review.

[Hoodoos]

Very Fascinating

Probably the best movie I have seen on Newgrounds EVER! THe story was weird and Cryptic from the start and I though it was gross when all of those guys started growing from the blue guy's foot and How the orange ones came out. The flash was very well though out. I like things like this and I'm sure others do. It should be in first place in all time flashes. Like I said, your flash is different because most things on Newgrounds is about action or adventure or comedy but people like it when other people use their imagination. The art was very good too and the animation ran smoothley. I liked this flash a lot and I would reccomend it to everyone if i can which is why Im going to send this as a e-mail or facebook it so others can know about this. Here's the overall score:

Effort 10/10
Art 10/10
Animation 10/10
Concept 10/10
Originality 10/10

You did a very good job on this one. I hope you make another like this/

VillainousTurtleSLC responds:

Thank you so much what a nice review! :)

[Sad Link]

LOL

Get over it Link!

J0hnnyR0tt3n responds:

It's Link, do you really think he's gonna take this one laying down?
lol

[++Tetris++]

Ok?

Nice movie, next time make one that is longer

TheShyGuy responds:

I was doing it in time to the song :D, i wanted my first animation to be a music video but next time ill try and make it longer