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[Kees' Adventure 3]

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I thought the game itself was pretty fine but kind of got boring and repetitive because it is one of those trade in games where you just end up walking everywhere and talking to people but it is cool how it all leads up to the most important thing Kee needs but Kee IS a weird name. Did you know that?

The art was fine with the pixels but I think it needed to be a bit more detailed a bit to help it a little because it is just a bunch of colored pixels mixed into each other but then again the waterfall was pretty god but just make more things to make it seem a little less repetitive. The story was pretty generic though like "I will give you this for that" until you find the stupid gem to replace the eye and boom, you're done with that shit.

The audio was pretty cool but no sound effects? ;( Jk it's pretty good and fitting for a game like this but did you make the music or did someone else write it or uh compose it. Then I see it was a guy named bob. I think you showed some effort into making this and it is a quick 5 minute game you could just play when you are supa bored so nice job altogether.

I really don't think there is much else to say then putting a bit more animation into it because I only saw people arms moving and Kee moving and the waterfall moving and the statue and that was it in the whole thing so work on that and all of the other crap that I told you about and I am going to play number 4 when it comes out so bye!

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-Joshsouza

kcnh responds:

Thank you for your review.

[Joe's Minor Adventure]

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I thought this flash was pretty good and I really enjoyed it but the instructions were all weird because all of the connectors looks like something you should avoid but the name was pretty witty.

The art was really good and decent but I think it could be a bit better but the high scores table was pretty good too and it was good to do that. I think the animation was good too like the train coming and the warning for the train coming was all pretty cool plus everything else like that but why was the intro like not animated because it would be pretty cool if you did that.

I think you spent lots of time and effort onto this but it was pretty underrated to me because it looks like you spent a lot of time on this but the power up things was pretty cool too but the story wasn't that good and it is just a generic train chase but is there an end to this game because it's pretty stupid to have a game without an ending to it whatsoever unless there's a free play mode but it was a bit challenging to me.

Overall I think this is a pretty good game that needs a bit more attention on it because it looks like a pretty good game to me and I found it saddening that I didn't see it in the portal when it came out but it's pretty cool and I think you should keep up the good work.

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-Joshsouza

ProfessorFlash responds:

It's a highscore game so there's really no real ending to it. Get as much points as you can. But I felt that adding some sort of a story was still important. It answers the question "why am I doing this" for people. It may seem little silly but people find it important to understand the game like that. It gives reason for playing.
Thanks for your review.

[The Ñ]

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I thought this was a nice little game but it was really just breakout with an Explict song playing. So I will start now:

ART 4/10

I didn't really like all of the gradient and it just told me that you were too lazy to put in much art in it plus the ball is all gradient too but it would be nice to have a better background though.

AUDIO 5/10

I guess since the audio is one of the main points of the game, II guess I have to give it an OK score but why did you put the song in for a breakout game? It doesn't really make much sense nor does it explain anything. But It would kind of be cool to put a bit more sounds into it.

GAMEPLAY 6/10

I thought the fast ball was kind of cool but I think it should be more challenging because really? 20 lives! that's kind of overdoing it so be sure to fix it once you get the mute button in. That's another thing, the mute button should be easy since you just have to put only 1 or 2 lines of code in to do it so be sure to fix it.

ANIMATION 5/10

I gotta say it was cool to made this fast pacing but the only animation I could find was the ball moving and the blocks disappearing but at least the thing worked and oh yeah, the rectangle at the bottom moving.

OVERALL 6/10

I think this could be a good game if you put in powerups and stuff into it and make it more challenging and a bit more artwork because I kind of lost attention at the second level but remember, try to make the game addicting and make people want to play it!

-Joshsouza

TheSongSalad responds:

Thanks for the review man. The incredible amount of gradients were because I have no artistic talent. Not quite lazy, it actually took me a large amount of time to get right, lol.

Thanks for the suggestions and the review though man, I appreciate it.

[minigamez!]

Sloppy

Could use a lot of work and I barely could read what all of the messages said in the maze one.Work harder next tim and I dont know what you have to do for the gas mingame

piggy123 responds:

gas is S to attack as for the maze talk to logan about it

[Piggy123s flash tutorial]

thx

Ahh now I can make a decnt game when i get flash and Flashy sounded like someone with helium

piggy123 responds:

it was my voice but in garage band i added helium lol thanks

[Notepad Drawing Collab 2009]

Luis

Luis STILL needs to see this

JKAmovies responds:

Haha, yeah :3

[How to draw 8: Newgrounds]

thanks

Ahhhh, the original characters

Aprime responds:

Yeppppppp.. you need to original characters :D