Joshsouza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[P.S. You Rock My World]

Review Request Club

Well I thought this was really weird but I didn't see much relevance to Sandshrew and trust me I have played a Pokemon game before but why is it called "PS. Your rock my world?" but I'm guessing that a gijinka is a pokemon in human form or something.

Well you did a good job on the shading and I know why you don't have a background so I won't critique on that I guess but good color scheme for the pokemon since he is pretty much golden but what's with the ear jacks and the cigarette because it doesn't really make sense but I think you did a nice job on the detailing too like the hair and the other stuff.

Well I think the legs are way too skinny so I think you should beef that up a bit there. But what is with the gloves too? But I think it is time to go to the overall score right about now,

I thought this was ok but just try to beef up the legs a bit but that pretty much it.

~Review Request Club~

-Joshsouza

Aigis responds:

The headphones are supposed to represent Sandshrew's ears. The cigarette is because Sandshrew is badass. The gloves represent Sandshrew's claws.

And it's called 'P.S. You Rock My World', because you truly do.

[Mini Mischief]

Review Request Club

Well nice job on this one and it makes lots of sense that you were put in the dragons group on DeviantART but what's your username? I want to follow you on Deviantwach! Sorry but that sounded wrong but here goes the review.

I saw some resemblance from that dragon's head to a human face for some reason but yeah, it just makes me think what the heck that is but nice idea altogether but you should try to board a bit more detailed because it looks pretty generic to me but this looks like it could have a story to go along with it.

The colors were used well in the right ares like the shading and the wood and the shading was fantastic too and the wing looked really nice too so good job on that too but I have to say this is pretty original because I always imagine dragons to be huge creatures that can eat you whole but why can't the dragon just burn somebody's hand a little? lol. Well here is the overall:

Well overall great job and nice piece but this isn't one of my favorites really but really good job on this but never stop drawing because you have a talent so great job!

~Review Request Club~

-Joshsouza

EchoRun responds:

My Deviant art ID is Shadowjewel. :)

I would have liked more detail too but the week time limit did, well, limit me.

And in my head dragons range from mice to mountains in size, so room for lots of variation. :P

[Inxdemia]

Review Request Club

I think this looks like something I would draw when I get drunk but I didn't realize that this was notebook paper until I saw the bottom because the whole paper was pretty much covered but I think you did a really nice job with this whole thing really.

I couldn't really tell what most of the stuff was but that is creative I guess but there's not much bad things to say about this since it was because you were just bored as crap but try not to spam the art portal with just doodles because trust me, it happened to me but I think I am exaggerating since this is your only kind of doodling piece but yeah, nice work on this. Well there's not much to say about this really so I will just go onto the overall score.

Well I thought this was well drawn and trust me, I do this too but you do it better than me but I can't really review that you didn't color it because you only had one pen but good piece but don't always take may word for it because I always review things generously.

~Review Request Club~

-Joshsouza

MonoFlauta responds:

"I think this looks like something I would draw when I get drunk"

hahaha well i was in biology, math, etc... it is similar the confussion haha

"I think you did a really nice job with this whole thing really."

Great thanks :P

"Well I thought this was well drawn and trust me, I do this too but you do it better than me but I can't really review that you didn't color it because you only had one pen but good piece but don't always take may word for it because I always review things generously."

Didnt get if it was good or not lol

Thanks anyway!

[Psychedelic Rave]

Review Request Club

I thought you did a really good job on this one like the theme: huge party with a shitload of colors which was really good but it was hard to tell if they were outside or inside when I first saw this! But he hair details on all of the faces were good but it needed a bit more details on the face itself but it still looked really good so it isn't that bad really.

Like I said before, you put lots of cool colors in this which was really cool and I also thought you spent a lot of effort on this and it looked like it was one of those drawings that take a year to make but I enlarged it and saw lots of cool stuff in it like I almost looked at every detail in the whole thing!

Overall I loved it and I really like drawings like this that are good quality like that but just try and work on the face details a bit more but I really enjoyed this a lot and I am looking forward to your next.

~Review Request Club~

-Joshsouza

Weenog responds:

thanks man, i geuss some of the characters in the front could use some more detail to create more dept. if i ever feel like it i'll sort all these little errors you guys listed out and i bet this piece will improve alot becuase of it. ^^

[Tri-Stream]

Review Request Club

I thought you did a really good job on this and it is way better than the first one and I see some more improvements in the whole thing so I guess I will start. The colors went really well together and I didn't see any "alone" colors but nice signature that you put on the bottom and I see that you followed my advice there so good job on that too.

I really like the effects that were put into it but the signature font looks a bit off for the whole picture but it's not really a big problem but it looks like you put the loops around the line to make it look more detailed but it worked because without it, It would not look as good as it does right now. Overall I really like it and I am seeing improvement in your art and I definitely hope that you get scouted sometime soon I didn't see any really big problems so there you go!

~Review Request Club~

-Joshsouza

Flash-Gamers responds:

Thanks for the review!

Glad everyone is noticing that I actually take my reviews into consideration, and use them to my advantage.

Yeah, I remember that I had to make the sig alot smaller than I usually have it...had to improve!

Also I hope I get scouted too!

[Orbital Shift]

Review Request Club

I think you did another really nice job on this but I did see a couple of flaws but not that much in general so I guess I will start now:

I think the signature is cool and all but you need to make it smaller because sometimes it brings my attention to that then the picture itself and try using a different font because it didn't exactly fit in with the rest either but nice fog effect you put on it! I think the light in the middle was a very good idea because without it, I would be looking at the sig the whole time and just comment on that.

On another note, I really liked the background with white and blue lines going across. I saw lots of details in this and much effort and the lines DO orbit around the white orb a little! the were lots of effects in this that I don't really wanna list them and I was really fascinated by this.

Overall I think this is another great piece from you and I think you should keep up the work like this because you seem to be better at doing this kind of artwork so just keep drawing!

-Joshsouza

Flash-Gamers responds:

Once again, thank you for leaving a review!

Yeah, now thinking back I think I should've made my sig a little smaller....really takes your eyes away fromt the picture itself.

The font fits, because if you notice the pieces that aren't being pulled into the center of the picture are already disenegrating...which gave it a cool look in my opinion...which doesn't really matter I guess.

Thanks for the review, and on that note...I'm considering about maybe remaking this picture in the near future....(but don't kno when excatly)

[Lobbyist of Cthulhu]

Review Request Club

I think you did a nice job doing this and when I saw it i was all like lolwut? But great imagination you have here and I will start now:

I thought the coloring was great but I still fail to figure out wtf this is but I gotta say it's pretty nice and I am sure this is one of things I would see in one of my nightmares but the shading is really great and I like the background image too with all of the weird spirals which makes you think you are going into another dimension and I am sure this is what I would see first.

I really love the details you put onto it but the head reminds me of something but I really don't know what. but the heel of his foot looks like it is going up and yeah, that was the only flaw I could really find in this entire piece because it is THAT good! So I guess I will move onto the overall score now.

I really liked the piece and I tried my best to find a flaw and I only found 1 which I mentioned in the last paragraph so just go back there because I don't feel like typing that ting again but you did a very nice job with everything in this and all of the details and stuff so you got a 10 and a favorite from me!

-Joshsouza

[Stream Scene]

Review Request Club

I think the whole thing looks great but I might sound weird just because I just reviewed a freaking penis dragon. (lol kidding but i did review a penis dragon)

I like the whole effect in the background but why does it say ether on it? Is that like your signature or the name of a flash you are making but who cares really. I like the artistic effect in it to make it look fucking badass and the stream around the ether thing in the middle too. I also like all of the light in at and the font for the ether thing again. But I don't think you really need the blue lines on the edge because it doesn't really fit in with all of the other colors.

That's another thing, the colors are really nice with the shades of red and white and the random dots floating in the air to make this looks modern but I also like how the white lines turn into this fog thing near the edge and disintegrates. I really don't have much else to say so I will go onto the overall score.

It was hard to find flaws in this but I really liked this and I think you should keep this kind of work up and you might get scouted soon because this is a really good piece but there was really no need for the blue lines so you should take them out. Here's a 10 for you.

-Joshsouza

Flash-Gamers responds:

Thanks, the "blue" was apart of the effect I had to use to make the light in the bottom left side of the picture.

"ETH3R" is my signature, I don't feel like making a new account so just took it upon myself and changed my name from flash-gamers to ETH3R...sound cooler imo.

Thanks for the review, I can tell you took the time to really study this piece I drew!

I find this review helpful!

[purple castle crasher]

Review Request Club

I thought it was OK but seriously! It's RED! I think you should fix the name first of all but I have to say this is exceptional so here it goes:

I thought the shading was pretty good but the shoe looked a bit sloopy and pixelated when this should clearly look umm... clear but It kind of loooked like you drew it in 30 minutes and the blood should be more detailed.

I think there is enough Castle Crashers Fan art on Newgrounds by now plus DanPaladin and JohnyUtah Already draws them all the time so I had to take off a point for that but I say this IS better than most Castle Crasher drawing but you didn't need to show it off all over the forums.

Anyways, I think it needs a bit more shading in places and maybe detail the blood a bit more because that is just like making a stick with badass drawn clothes on with the best background ever.

I already put the RRC signature at the top so I guess I will skip it. -Joshsouza

lgnxhll responds:

thanks for the reveiw

[dolfin and fish]

Too Simple

I think you should actually take a better quality photo and used something better than lined paper because it is pretty bad plus do you see things like this in the art portal at all? Plus you should put at least a little water background in the middle along withs some color to complete it.

I also think it needs more details in it because it is pretty basic and maybe some shading would help a bit to make it better but you have to fix it at least a little bit because I have to say that it looks like something that took 5 minutes and like a little sketch so maybe fix that and put in a background and you would be fine.

(Review Request Club) -Joshsouza