Joshsouza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cock Joke]

Nice job

You did a very good job with the colors but it doesn't look anything like your other artwork but it is still very good.

I also like how the chicken is just shitting while he is choking him. You also did a good job with the shading, it makes it look really good also it looks really clear probably because you used illustrator or something.

Although, they don't look like the real tankmen because it is kind of boxy but it is more original! I also like how the other tankmen is just up there with his tank laughing.

Here is the overall score:

Design 10/10
Originality 10/10
Catch Phrase 10/10
Colors 10/10
Effort 10/10

I bet you are so happy that you finally got a helpful review!

AlmightyHans responds:

i used flash. not illustrator

[Chessboard #1]

Why so much checkerboards

I see that you used the same style of art with checkerboard 3 and it doesn't look all real with the style of art you are doing. Why did you randomly put in a coke can thing in it? It's just plain weird.

You need to have at least 4 pieces of art to get scouted but you SHOULD do more even though you only have 4. The limit of having art without being scouted is 20. You can send 20 pieces of art and if you ran out of room, you can post on the art forums.

The way you made the checkerboard 3-D doesn.t look wide enough. I also found out that that coke can is a chess piece. It just looks green for some reason. I'm happy to say that the backround actually was good for this one.

So here is the overall score:

Effort 8/10
Originality 10/10
Design 7/10
Concept 8/10
Added Effects 8/10
Colors 10/10 (Because the chess piece looked green and I think it's a pretty good optical illusion)

Don't stop trying OK?

{Review Request Club}

XwaynecoltX responds:

lol coke can? haha not sure where you got that one from, its a chess piece, i dont like to to do normal type of art stuff, so if some stuff is random thats how i like it, and i do like chess/checkerboards.

anyways thanks for the review

~X~

[Palm Tree]

It's a little too fat

The backround was kind of weird since there is now water near but that's just plain imagination. Also the palm tree trunk is a little too fat. Also the coconuts are kind of fat aand some should still be on the tree.

Ahh, finding a palm tree in the middle od the desert, that's creative. Also, 2006 isn't that long ago, that's only three years ago which iss why the quality on you pictures is bad.

Also, what did you use to make this? Some computer tool or by hand. Also you should make NEW art because you are probably better at it now. I also noticed in your pictures, you put a lot of shine in it.

Anyways, here is the overall score:

Effects 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Originality 8/10
Overall Effort 7/10

So Like I said: make NEW art.

XwaynecoltX responds:

Thanks for the review

~X~

[Checkerboard #3]

Better

Better than checkerboard 2 and more imagination in it with the door thing but really, what is it? You did a better job with the shining on it. But needs more colors in it because tan, red, and black just won't do it. It was kind of small but im sure you put more effort into this one. The black tiles looks like it is made out of marble. the red one too. In the next one you should show where that door thing leads to. Why didn't you make it bigger though? I probably like it more if you made it bigger and anywat, it is just a bunch of squares. Just keep trying at art and maybe you will get scouted by more people. Here is the overall score:

Originality 10/10
Effort 7/10
Concept 8/10
Design 6/10
Added Effects 8/10
Like I said, don't stop trying.

XwaynecoltX responds:

Yeah this is my fave, i plan to make more but not till i get my flash working again, hanks for the review, i posted up 2 new pieces reviews would be nice

~X~

[Chess Checketboard #2]

Kind of boring really

It seriously isn't hard to draw an edge of a chess board and it doesn't make sense that there is a shine on every corner of a tile. All tyhis really is is lines exceptt the text and your logo. Anyone would think of this too but at least you did it in 3-D. I doubt you put much effort into this but i still scouted you anyways. Also, why did you put a frame on it? it doesn't make it look any better. So is the boring blue backround. I don't know what else to say so here is the overall score:

Effort 4/10
Originality 2/10
Concept 4/10
Design 3/10
You should make better things then this.

XwaynecoltX responds:

I tend to like borders in my art stuffs, thank you for the review, be sure to checkout my other 2 art pieces, i posted up Checkerboard #1 and another drawing, i respond o all reviews hanks again

~X~

[Slaying The Beast]

Amazing

I like how you made the armor like, shine. the creativity was very good and the sword reminded me of the energy sword from Halo 2 and 3. also how you made the light on the guy's armor make a little light. All the features you put into this made it look very realistic like the rest of your art. I also like how you create your creatures, armor, etc. You are very good at drawing. Good Job

[pirate]

Original

I liked the texture of it and how he was carrying a mini cannon. I also loved the variety of details. I think you did a good job

ts3ts3 responds:

thank you for the kind words!

[Lindsey Zombie]

ehh... ugly

Although, i loved how it did that stupid hollywood thing that every famous person does. Nice Work!

[Beach Time]

good

i can review now.
I think the concept was original and it needed more ehh. Spazazz.
Ahh what the heck it was good.

Rogersmax responds:

it is only draw in painttool